Design issue Spelling Errors - Help to find them all in the game!
#1
Hey there,  

Just a few clarity changes needed to enhance the overall flow of the text.

   

A battle "have" broken out in the dungeon.

Needs to be: A battle has broken out in the dungeon.

I'll post all I see when I can.
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#2
Huehue. In Dev team haven't native English speakers, so I expect there are more then this spelling errors. Big Grin

But it's not too late, if you find more maybe next time it'll be possible to release new version free of spelling errors... but I don't know if Rasmus already talked with someone who could do some proofreading for the game.
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#3
I am more than happy to do some proofreading if you'd like Smile
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#4
The "have" has been changed to "has".
Let me know if you find other spelling errors and I will fix them Smile
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#5
Awesome. Will do!
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#6
I split the thread because the graphic glitch reported here (http://forum.dwelvers.com/showthread.php?tid=1471) wasn't a spelling error, but a graphical glitch.

This one has been solved and confirmed!

Should we make a sticky thread out of spelling errors? Feels like this one will come back and it is a waste creating new topics every time.
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#7
I agree Rasmus, spelling errors/clarity text changes will be a common problem.

Found a few more changes that should be made to some item descriptions to add more clarity.
   
"This is a simple wooden shield which gives the wearer some block chance. It is very cheap to produce and can be life saving."


   
"This wooden club is a stick with a rock on it. A simple and an effective killing tool, but don't expect it to knock down a troll!"

Seeing as how the imps can't use weapons or attack, might as well change the flavour text.

   
Misspelled "Weild", should be "Wield".

   
"Ammunition for your cannon traps, highly effective when not pointing your way!"

Changed the text because we know it is made in the metalworks room, no point repeating it...

   
"Once a useful tool for butchering animals, now a weapon that is used to practice the same skills on its enemies".
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#8
Not an important fix but one that should be fixed for the next patch.
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#9
(16-06-2015, 12:12 AM)Rasmus Wrote: I split the thread because the graphic glitch reported here (http://forum.dwelvers.com/showthread.php?tid=1471) wasn't a spelling error, but a graphical glitch.

This one has been solved and confirmed!

Should we make a sticky thread out of spelling errors? Feels like this one will come back and it is a waste creating new topics every time.

You don't need to say more, it's already a sticky thread. I think even in beta 1.7m there will still be spelling errors - unless you hire some proofreaders or anyone who would write in English for Dwelvers. Cool
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#10
Thank you Sebt Smile And btw. I forgot to add that the spelling errors reported above got corrected with the last version Smile
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#11
Awesome! Thanks
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#12
just a quick note related to text, road tooltip from build menu is same as reinforce wall
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#13
Thanks Smile Fixed with the next version!
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#14
In the hydraulics menu:
option 5 "off" is spelled "of"
option 3 "off" is spelled "of" and Explosion is misspelled.
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#15
Thank you!
Fixed with the next version Smile
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