Feedback/Modification Game Development - Updated screenshots
#1
I have replaced the old screenshots on the dwelvers site: http://dwelvers.com/screenshots/

These screenshots will also replace the once that are on the steam page.

What do you think? Is the spelling / grammar correct? Is there something that should be added / removed?
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#2
I can't think of a thing your missing.
Door.
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#3
Good stuff, I think the orange color really works.

For the grammar:

(Manage an Evil Economy) Maybe change that to Sustain Evil with Resources. Don't really think you could call an Economy evil, just the force behind it.
Text should read - Store gold, rock, wood, and weapons. Use them to strengthen your army and economy.
(Craft Weapons and Armor)
Armor is plural and singular. You don't need an 's' in armors.
(Bake Bread and Brew Beer)
Remove the 's' from requires
(Invite Your Minions to a Feast)
Text should read - The way to a minion's heart is through their stomach *Guessing that is a play on the saying 'The way to a man's heart is through his stomach.'
(Raid the Surface)
Suggested edit - But beware! For every action, there is an equal opposing reaction. *Thank you Newton!
(Imprison Enemies)
Text should read - Build a prison so that you have somewhere to lock up enemies
(Engineer Traps)
in-depth not in depth

If you wanted to add anything you could showcase squads, provide an example of Rally Flags (squad or rally all), Reveal Hidden Lands spell, fishing, and/or building bridges across expanses of water/lava.
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#4
Hmm, for some reason ManageAnEvilEconomy.jpg is missing/doesn't show on this page anymore.
Spec: Win 10, ATI 7800 HD, res: 1280x1024x75. I support The Venus Project & Resource-Based Economy
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#5
Thank you for your input mello, I have changed the text and added the suggested screenshots Smile

Try again Sebt, I removed it and replaced it with "SustainEvilWithResources.jpg".
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#6
Awesome, love the fishing caption
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#7
Yes, everything works, pretty good job on those screenshots. I see you added some more. Smile
Spec: Win 10, ATI 7800 HD, res: 1280x1024x75. I support The Venus Project & Resource-Based Economy
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